tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2618685271512418876.post4019022332140269239..comments2023-10-11T09:36:37.977-04:00Comments on Almost There: More Poetrybobbiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00658103343742852411noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2618685271512418876.post-61138107997967352412009-02-11T18:45:00.000-05:002009-02-11T18:45:00.000-05:00You are justifiably proud... your daughter is such...You are justifiably proud... your daughter is such a wordsmith! /DebAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2618685271512418876.post-62980446749306930242009-02-11T12:15:00.000-05:002009-02-11T12:15:00.000-05:00Oh, and I must get some daffodils. I need cheering...Oh, and I must get some daffodils. I need cheering up. Those are so pretty.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17296223961815248113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2618685271512418876.post-6213573897922396542009-02-11T12:14:00.000-05:002009-02-11T12:14:00.000-05:00This line really popped in my mind:Did the third m...This line really popped in my mind:<BR/><BR/>Did the third man, walking a few paces behind shaking his head<BR/>and stuffing his hands in his pockets, aim his grin at the floor<BR/>like an apology? <BR/><BR/>And a poem with one or a few of these stunning lines is a good poem, indeed.<BR/><BR/>Another "popper" but more gently so.<BR/><BR/>the fragrance of the petals staining her sleeves,<BR/>her sister finding her there, damp and giddy, late for dinner...<BR/><BR/>Very poignant. Lovely lineAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17296223961815248113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2618685271512418876.post-90293985599580561372009-02-10T12:10:00.000-05:002009-02-10T12:10:00.000-05:00I like her poetry also and I can see why you are p...I like her poetry also and I can see why you are proud of her. This poem makes me feel like I am on the bus with her and I can only wish for laughter that lingers and sends me tumbling into the paper whites with a smile on my face!Kathie Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10377224759599266209noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2618685271512418876.post-36347050252647659952009-02-10T10:12:00.000-05:002009-02-10T10:12:00.000-05:00Kitty is very talented. I enjoyed her poem.March ...Kitty is very talented. I enjoyed her poem.<BR/>March will be here before you know it. LisaRamblings of a Villas Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15004822804493458153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2618685271512418876.post-77633341474415463772009-02-09T23:36:00.000-05:002009-02-09T23:36:00.000-05:00Your daughter has a lovely way with words and capt...Your daughter has a lovely way with words and captures moments so beautifully and vividly. You must be immensely proud. <BR/><BR/>March will be a delightful reunion!Linda Murphyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16801313102525232162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2618685271512418876.post-45739265587010228572009-02-09T15:03:00.000-05:002009-02-09T15:03:00.000-05:00Bobbie, A great poem! Love the whole story, feelin...Bobbie, A great poem! Love the whole story, feeling behind it. Your daughter expressed what so many of us think & feel in the fleeting moments of an ordinary day.<BR/>Thanks for sharing it. Can't wait to read more!dianasfaria.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10488357854017358868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2618685271512418876.post-19323392732896202282009-02-09T13:06:00.000-05:002009-02-09T13:06:00.000-05:00this is a good poem ... you have every right and t...this is a good poem ... you have every right and then some to be proud of her ... and your others as well!Darylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2618685271512418876.post-91983683074739334162009-02-09T13:05:00.000-05:002009-02-09T13:05:00.000-05:00well you know by now how much I think of Kitty and...well you know by now how much I think of Kitty and the kid ;)<BR/><BR/>that is a great poem, she relates her surroundings so beautifully<BR/><BR/>hurry up March :)Diannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02946500110072411468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2618685271512418876.post-24612303135386659332009-02-09T11:26:00.000-05:002009-02-09T11:26:00.000-05:00I love the poem! Your daughter writes beautifully!...I love the poem! Your daughter writes beautifully! I know it's hard to be separated from her and your grandson by so many miles. I do live with my youngest and he's not married and travels much of the time, but the other three are scattered over the country and it's sometimes years before we can get together, so I know what you're talking about. Thank goodness for the internet that makes it so easy to stay in touch. I know you're counting the days until March -- I know I'm counting them until May when two of them will try to make the trip that got cancelled due to weather. Have a great week, Bobbie!Sylvia Khttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05484577678585907669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2618685271512418876.post-91830310730749926062009-02-09T11:11:00.000-05:002009-02-09T11:11:00.000-05:00I like this poem very much!! I can see why you're...I like this poem very much!! I can see why you're so proud; it sounds like things are going very well, too. All the best to her!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com